The Day Of The Unlucky Boy

It was another ordinary day at Strange Hill High. There was a new student called Steve. He was walking to his seat but then he slipped and hit his face on the floor. Then everyone laughed at him.When he sat down he was stuck on his chair and didn’t realize until the end of the lesson. When he tried to get up he was stuck by a piece of gum. “Another unlucky day!” he sighed. As soon as he got the gum off he got up and went in the hallway then the bell started ringing and he couldn’t find his way back. “Why am I so unlucky?” he said. Then out of nowhere a strange shadow appeared in the hallway. He quickly hid. It was the headmaster. “Where is he?” the headmaster said. ” Oh no he’s going to find me” then Steve quickly hid. Steve traveled for about four hours, then when he found the exit It was locked! He must of been there for about 3 hours tying to unlock the door exit. Will Steve Ever Get Out? Please give me 3 comments, Why i should do a part 2 or another story? How many stars do you rate this story? and if you are watching strange hill high i’m not copying. Please no negative comments.https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TtU2DRo6f2I

 

29 thoughts on “The Day Of The Unlucky Boy

  • 09/23/2016 at 2:14 pm
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    Kamran, YOU SERIOUSLY NEED TO DO PART TWO!!!!! The story is awesome 🙂

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      • 09/29/2016 at 5:02 pm
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        Yay! Can’t wait to read it. I’m working on my next article.

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        • 10/10/2016 at 3:01 pm
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          so am I look forward to reading it

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  • 09/23/2016 at 2:47 pm
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    Brilliant article Kamran!!! (: I can’t wait for part two!! XD

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  • 09/23/2016 at 5:00 pm
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    Amazing article Kamran look forward for part 2!

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  • 09/23/2016 at 5:00 pm
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    look forward for part 2!

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  • 09/27/2016 at 6:23 pm
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    Please write part two! Can’t wait to read it!

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  • 10/01/2016 at 10:07 pm
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    Did you comment as Anonymous on my article?

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  • 10/10/2016 at 11:40 am
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    i rate this 9/10, please write part 2.Can’ wait two read it.

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  • 10/10/2016 at 11:40 am
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    KAMRAN I THINK YOUR STORY IS FANTASTIC YOU NEED TO DO PART TWO

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  • 10/10/2016 at 11:43 am
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    Kamran you need to do part two the story so far it is sick. i liked the bit where it said that he got stuck to the chair with only a piece of chewing gum. people enjoy it, Kamran, you need to do part two soon because our heads will explode if you don’t. It’s that good!

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  • 10/10/2016 at 11:47 am
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    “Another unlucky day.”-Steve, AKA, the unlucky boy.

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  • 10/10/2016 at 12:04 pm
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    Kamran you seriously need to do a part 2. I really want to know how he gets out of the school. It was amazing.

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  • 10/10/2016 at 12:12 pm
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    KAMRAN YOU DEFINITELY NEED TO DO A SERIES LIKE DAIRY OF A WIMPY KID.

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  • 10/10/2016 at 2:52 pm
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    I rate this a 10/10 it was amazing you need to do a part two.

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  • 10/10/2016 at 3:04 pm
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    Thank you for the positive comments and you Tyler.

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  • 10/10/2016 at 3:05 pm
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    I love the atmosphere and there setting its very interesting I love the article.

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  • 10/10/2016 at 3:06 pm
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    I rate this 11 out of 10 stars . by the way im glad im not that unlucky!

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  • 10/10/2016 at 3:10 pm
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    I love the setting and the atmosphere its was very interesting. I like the bit where Steve said another unlucky day. I love the article.

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    • 10/14/2016 at 2:13 pm
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      thanks tyler beware part two!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • 10/11/2016 at 5:48 pm
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    I liked it I’m glad I’m not that unlucky

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  • 10/13/2016 at 5:54 pm
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    Good article Kamran!! 🙂

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